BungerColumbus's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Versus Umbra]

Damn I had searched for this a lot. I remember loving it so much when I was little and I finally found it. The upgrades on the items make everything. 10/10. Also some love towards Kongregate for having the search system, without them I would had lost this game.

[Echo Chamber]

Genius idea. Honestly. This deserves a much better score than it has now. Really good.
Please make a bigger one.

[Scrawler]

Really good music. Pretty unique. Weird collision. I think the movement can be improved.

[Immune Defense]

Damn bro. Our immune system is so complex it invented rockets before we did.

The immune system is really interesting and a really good game can be made out of it, and honestly, I am really happy someone tried to make a game with it as the main idea.

Some things you can change:

- Make a tutorial level. Poor player is put inside the level from the beginning with the dev thinking he read the rules before going (I think only 10% percent of players actually do that).
What you can do is slowly introduce the player to all the things inside the game. (Take Kingdom Rush as example).

- Art is really boring. I dont want to say it is bad, but I know for sure you can make it better. Both audio and visual. I am too lazy to give you ways to make it better. One way is to add particles. The music doesn't really work with the game, look at Kurzgesagt and what music they use for their immune system videos. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7N7UpVZSoyM.

The music in this game is giving only one feeling and that is of calm. Which I guess it works somewhat. But in videogames the feeling of calm is rarely used, and it isn't used when you are being attacked by tons of bacteria.

Also try to choose a color palette and use that palette for the whole game. (examples would be Enter the Gungeon, Hollow Knight).

Hope you enjoyed my review, game gud but it can be made even better.

Also why is there a Quit button in a web game. ( saw the itch.io link nvm ¯\_(ツ)_/¯)

[360 Degrees]

"OUGH!"

[Action Packed Adventure]

I think I am gonna have a heart attack lmao

[Love Me Newgrounds!!!]

This. Is extremely gay.

10/10 would play it again.

Edit: I got eaten... how???

[Pack Your Bags]

MMMMMMMMMMM

[Rail or Die]

Really gut. Add more stuff. Make it able to find it more common. For example you could have the shopkeeper for each station once you obtain some type of item or something.

Add some story.

Other than this, again, really gut.

[RED in The Wrong Part of Town.]

First of all. Nice intro. It feels like the GameBoy one. The music is really nice and the idea is really new. A 2D game where if you walk you don't aim that good.

Some things you could try to change would be the difficulty. Look at Enter The Gungeon, the game is a bullet hell, but at the start it is fairly easy and keeps the player intrigued so that when he looses he wants to see more and play again. The first time I played this I lost in like 10 seconds.

RowanFuture responds:

I completely agree
I'm definitely going to update it with a slower difficulty ramp